This is the progress I made on a novel version of the anime musical Interstella 5555: The 5tory Of The 5ecret 5tar 5ystem. Please keep in mind it only has minor tweaking with it with spaced out, as well as spelling errors corrected, but most of the grammar is still intact.
Chapter 1: Celebration
On the peaceful planet of StarFeild, the party of a lifetime was starting. A band known as, Interstella, was playing at this party.
The crowd was waiting, talking about Interstella.
A blue ship, in the shape of an electric guitar, flies toward the main area of StarFeild, where the band is to appear.
Inside the ship..
The pilot came to his room, where the band were tuning their instruments.
"So guys, you ready?" the pilot asked, as the door opened.
The guitarist looked up at him "Yeah Shep, almost." he said as he moved the blonde bangs of his hair away from his eyes.
"Good, 'cause we're almost to the stadium. Just a few more minutes." Shep said smiling, as he walked out.
A shorter male, sitting at a drum-set, looked at the blonde guitarist.
"Ar', what do you think of my idea for the light effects?" he asked as he polished his drum-sticks.
Ar', or rather- Arpeguis smiled "Sure thing, Baryl. I'm sure Octave can hook it up. Right?" he said, turning to the key-boarder/vocalist.
The key-boarder; Octave, looked over, a bit unsure but nodding in agreement "Yeah, I can get it hooked up after we land." he answered.
Arpeguis looked over at the bass player, as she looked down a little.
"Stella, are you okay?" He asked, looking a little concerned as they were almost there.
Stella was humming a little tune. "Hmm? Oh, sorry." she said looking a bit embarrassed. "I was just day-dreaming I guess."
"Alright Interstella, it's time to land." Shep said, over the inter-com.
The ship hovers over a stadium, with an open roof for the ship. Then a large yellowish blinding ray shines to the stage.
Suddenly a guitar is heard playing a nice tune.
Then a bass joins in.
Drums start to play.
Then a voice sings "ONE MORE TIME!"
The band appears on stage, playing their number one song "Celebration"! The crowd cheers and dances to the enjoyable beat.
One more time!
One more time we're gonna celebrate
Oh yeah all right don't stop dancing!
One more time we're gonna celebrate
Oh yeah..
One more time!
One more time we're gonna celebrate
Oh yeah all right don't stop dancing
One more time!….
Mmmmmmmmmm…
You know I'm just feeling Celebration Tonight…
Celebrate..Don’t wait too late..
You know..You don't stop..You can't stop, ah…
We're gonna celebrate..
One more time..
One more time!
Celebration..You know we´re gonna do it right! Tonight!
Hey! Just feeling..
Music's got me feeling the need.. The need!
Yeah. C'mon. Alright, we're gonna celebrate..
One more time…
Celebrating, feeling so free…
Music's got me feeling so free…
One more time, Music's got me feeling so free…
We're gonna celebrate, celebrating feeling so free…
One more time, Music's got me feeling so free…
We're gonna celebrate, celebrating feeling so free……..
ONE MORE TIME!
Music's got me feeling so free, We're gonna celebrate, celebrating feeling so free, One more time!
Music's got me feeling so free, We're gonna celebrate, celebrating feeling so free, One more time!
Music's got me feeling so free, We're gonna celebrate, celebrating feeling so free, One more time!
Music's got me feeling so free, We're gonna celebrate, yeah……….
ONE MORE TIME!
As they continue, someone is watching them.. Watching, and plotting…
Chapter 2: The Kill
Suddenly the lights everyone fade to grey..
Alarms go off..
Darkened costumed troppers come into the stadium from all entrances..
The room fills with toxic gas..making all of the crowd, including Interstella, pass out..All, but Arpeguis..
"Why are you here?" asked Arpeguis, as he looked toward to group of Troopers.
"We're here for Interstella" the trooper said as he aimed a gas-gun toward Arpeguis.
"No!" Arpeguis screamed as he ran away nearly passing out. He ran down a long hall, coming to two exits, guarded by more troopers.
Punching and kicking his way past them, he made his escape and the toxic gas wore off.
But little did Arpeguis know that the troop leader was watching him from a high platform.
"Alright, troopers 05, 10, and 18, go capture that alien!" He said as he jumped off the platform.
As the troopers head out to search for the missing Arpeguis, he jumps down from each level down to the next.
Running down the long walk-way, the Troop leader watches him and removes his backpack.
Opening it, he removes a rifle and bow and arrow set from the pack.
Attaching a small toxic-smoke bomb to the arrow, he stood steady and watched as Arpeguis ran past the lower level, chased by two troopers.
"Perfect." The leader said to himself as he aimed and targeted onto Arpeguis' back.
The arrow shot towards him at great speed, contacting him fiercely..
Arpeguis screamed in pain as he fell down, forcing himself to stand but failing..
The leader watched and spoke into his intercom "Alright troops, set up the pods and load 'em out!"
The troopers set the bands instruments onto a platform which covered itself in a forcefield and floated to a ship.
Then the same was done to Stella.
Then Octave.
Then Baryl.
And finally Arpeguis.
The guards of StarFeild were knocked out and the troops headed out.
All the pods were loaded and all troops were ready. They all stood ready teleport back to their ships.
The ships transfered them, then took off.
The toxic gas inside the stadium soon wore off, allowing the fans to awaken, unsure of what happened.
The three ships of troopers came to a much larger ship.
Inside..
A shadowy figure stands in the ship, seeing a hologram video of Interstella in their pods.
"Yes…Very good.." he said as he smiled evilly.. he held out his arms and laughed in victory as the ship headed out.
Inside the guard-tower of StarFeild..
One of the guards woke up quickly, and pressed a red button with an electric guitar logo, opening a map and sending a distress signal to another part of the galaxy…
Chapter 3: Backup
In another faroff part of the galaxy..Shep was cleaning his ship..Listening to an audio track of a song by Interstella.
The music sounded so wonderful..
Last night, I had a dream about you.
In this dream, I'm dancing right beside you.
And it looked like everyone was having fun.
The kind of feeling, I waited so long.
Ohh..I don't know what to do.
About this dream and you.
We'll make this dream come true.
Shep sang with the song, while using a machine to polish his ship.
Sadly, this is where I stopped writing. Anyone is free to continue it in their own way as they wish, but let me know if you're going to be using my given information.
