Death By Machines is a story (and originally intended to be an RPG) made by me, which is a first attempt to make a morbid or gory story.
Story
The story truly begins sometime during the modern age, when a young boy is kidnapped while in his front yard alone. The people who captured him were aliens disguised as humans, and planned to use him as an experiment in their cyborg transmutations. During some vital tests, their location was found by the FBI and was going to be taken down for illegal use of electricity. Rushing to hide their true identities, they hid their work, and sent the boy - their most morbid mutation - into space via a large time capsule.
For a few years, the capsule drifted in space, and the young boy was becoming a young man. He was eventually found by a group of aliens called the Akumax, ruthless space pirates. They picked him up and knew from a quick look that he was being tampered with by other aliens, so they finished the job and turned him into a killing machine. Though he was a mutation, thanks to their technology they managed to make him look mostly human. Most of his common earthly organs were removed, so it took a lot of artificial work to make him live, including a new heart. His vocal cords were removed as well as one of his eyes, and some of his brain shut down due to the time in space. Because of all this, he was left mostly a mindless slave.
Under the guidance of the Akumax, this boy was used as a weapon of mass destruction so that they could take over many alien races. But what will happen when they go after his original home, Earth…?
Plot Issues
There are some issues I have with the plot in order to make it work. Some are simple as designing the aliens and technology, but there are also some parts of it I an unsure about. One of which includes the main character killing a human of Earth, where he does this in a Church. I am unsure how to do this because of Religious conflict that would erupt.
There is also a minor issue with how he gets a name. Originally I named him Mikara, but due to changes made with the Akumax, I do not see it fitting for them to actually name him. I do know how he will get the name later, of course, but my issue here is what he will be named before then.
Writing Issues
I can't explain this, really. I have at least 90% of the plot figured out (10% being filler parts), however, I can't figure out how to write them all into words that fit its overall dark setting. If needed, I MAY have someone else write it for me, but I'm not sure.
